More Peer Reviews!

Yo. Here's the last of those peer reviews!

Julia:
Arg: Horoscopes are not scientifically or astronomically correct.
Strengths: Visually appealing, good color scheme. Very informative.
Develop: There is a lot of text, maybe break it up with images or charts somehow?

Meredith:
Arg: Photo manipulation can alter what we think is "normal" in terms of appearance.
Strengths: Good photo editing!
Develop: Maybe put it in a context more, I know it's not finished yet, but add text.

Olivia:
Arg: Encouraging travel throughout America; every state has something unique about it.
Strength: Visually appealing, creative!
Develop: Add some borders to the state lines, it's a little hard to tell where one ends and one begins. Also, keep it uniform with every picture being of a landscape or text.

Kim:
Arg: Promoting UP Unique Creations and what they do/make.
Strengths: Cool layout, I like the color scheme and the photos.
Develop: Watch the white space/positioning

Katelyn:
Arg: Presidential Candidate's image and how it may influence the country's view of them.
Strengths: Very well organized, nice pictures and descriptions
Develop: Lots of text, maybe try to shorten it/separate it more. Think about the size as well, it seemed a little small, but there is a lot of info.

Courtney:
Arg: Promoting participation in writing a novel during November event.
Strengths: I liked the layout, the font and the colors
Develop: Vary the sentence length more, seems a tad choppy. Also, is there an organization that puts it on?

Devin:
Arg: Eating on campus vs off campus as a college student.
Strengths: Good photos/descriptions, well-supported plan overall
Develop: Layout, photo explanations

Hannah:
Arg: a blog for her sister
Strengths: Colors, layout, very personal feel to it.
Develop: Font - it's a tad illegible, but it does add personality.

Jana:
Arg: Promoting Halonen Landscaping services
Strengths: Good visual, I like the layout and the simplicity of the ad as a whole.
Develop: More contact info?